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Ster Julie
06-05-2008, 10:56 PM
TITLE: To Serve the Living
AUTHOR: Ster Julie
SERIES: TOS
RATING: G
CODES: Amanda
CHALLENGES: Flag
ARCHIVE: Yes, but only where I post
SUMMARY: Amanda receives the flag that had covered Spock's burial
tube.

A/N: Quotes taken from The Star-Spangled Banner by Francis Scott Key

--ooOOoo--

Amanda was surprised to see the carton when it arrived at her home. A
package for her from the Enterprise? She knew that the ship had been
destroyed weeks ago when Spock's friends had rescued her son from the
Genesis planet. What could this be?

Amanda gasped as she opened the box and saw the folded Federation of
Planets blue flag, folded in the traditional tri-corned way. Even the
enclosed note had the traditional wording: We present this flag to you
on behalf of a grateful Federation.

Amanda ran her hand over the smooth fabric as her eyes misted over
with tears. This flag had no doubt covered Spock's coffin on that
terrible day he died. She clutched the flag to her bosom, so grateful
that her son was once again alive. Spock was not yet whole, but he was
making tremendous progress.

Amanda pondered what to do with the flag. Should she return it?
Donate it? Sarek was on Earth, pleading for leniency for the
Enterprise 6 (as the media had dubbed them), so she couldn't ask his
advice at the moment.

Amanda made a capricious decision. The dawn was glorious, with a
delicious breeze blowing. She unfolded the standard and raised it in
the garden where it danced merrily in the wind. Pulling a padd from
her pocket, she called up the poem written on Earth in 1814 by
Francis Scott Key, "The Star-Spangled Banner." Most of the poem did
not apply to this Federation flag, but some lines made her smile
while others made her weep.

O say, can you see, by the dawn's early light,
What so proudly we hail'd at the twilight's last gleaming?

And the rockets' red glare, the bombs bursting in air,
Gave proof thro' the night that our flag was still there.

What is that which the breeze, o'er the towering steep,
As it fitfully blows, half conceals, half discloses?
Now it catches the gleam of the morning's first beam,
In full glory reflected, now shines on the stream:

And where is that band who so vauntingly swore
That the havoc of war and the battle's confusion,
A home and a country should leave us no more?
Their blood has wash'd out their foul footsteps' pollution.
No refuge could save the hireling and slave
From the terror of flight or the gloom of the grave:

O thus be it ever when free-men shall stand
Between their lov'd home and the war's desolation;
Blest with vict'ry and peace, may the heav'n-rescued land
Praise the Pow'r that hath made and preserv'd us a nation!

Amanda closed the padd and wiped her eyes. Yes, Spock had seen more
than his share of "bombs bursting in air," "the havoc of war and the
battle's confusion," and "the gloom of the grave." Thankfully, his
stay in that grave was short-lived and she could behold his living
form once more.

Amanda noted the time and realized that she was due at Gol in an hour
for Spock's classes. She took down the flag and returned it to the
box. She placed it in her closet to deal with another time. This
flag had served the dead. It was time now for Amanda to serve the
living.

END

SLWatson
06-05-2008, 11:39 PM
Nicely handled! I like the simplicity of it; very clean little tale,
and a nice homage to what the flag means to them, even if it's just
fictional to us.

-Steff

Alan Heah
06-06-2008, 11:25 AM
Hello Ster Julie,

It's a nicely meaningful story, which draws from centuries past, of Amanda's unique human heritage.
This would be the US national anthem, which might be perceived by her time, the way we now regard medieval
times.
Yet I like the timeless message that she has picked this way, as it can apply to her Spock.
He is, after all, also of another world, sentience and culture, no matter how related we all would have
been, millions of years before.

That is what I like of The Star-Spangled Banner.
From being another country's song, it has become enjoyed for its melody, until now, it too carries a
universal message for me.
The rock group Toto, with their song from the album The Seventh One, helped imprint the last line of its 4
stanzas in my mind:
'... the land of the free and the home of the brave.'
And which song was that? Home of the Brave, of course.

Too bad, as I understand it, they're not as popular in the States, as in Europe and Asia.
(As mentioned in Wikipedia, under '30th Anniversary and future plans'.)

'Hold your head up high now
There's no need to cry now
We're not running any more

'Leave the politics behind, boys
They're not working any more
There's so much more at stake here
It's make or break here
Haven't we been here before... come on!
Tell me what we're waiting for

'You gotta remember
No... you don't have to be afraid
You still have the freedom to learn
And say what you want to say
You gotta remember
No... don't let them take away
The land we call the home of the brave'

--
Alan Heah