C & C Abstract sig attempt

[Swerve Left]

Here it is:

1st:

2nd:

My first, so don't be too harsh

 

[Guest]

ncie for the first time swerve, i actually like it
i wont to make me one

 

[theycallmefave]

I like the colors in the second.

The main thing I think it needs is just some more effects, and some different effects, because right now the composition is very one-note.

 

[Wulfstan]

i like everything but the pixelated dots in some places

 

[Z E R O]

It's very over-contrasted. Plus, there isn't any flow, everything's just floatin' around. It's all still really dark, but nice for a first.

 

[Snyper121]

Looks like outer space with everything just floating around lol. Looks really nice though

 

[Z E R O]

Yeah, that's sorta what I said. I think he was going for a Pluto kinda look LOL.
sweet, 500 points

 

[Princess Peach]

The 1rst one.